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waterfallen	May I Please Be Excused	Lead	[-]
Posts: 181 (12/03/07 18:32:56) PDs Poetic Mother Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts Report Post	Tags : None Maliciously you deserted me Against the assaults Your power you didnt assert I pleaded for you intervene Prayed on my knees until they bled Looking for you to rescue me Every time he engulfed me All I could do was be afraid Salvation you wouldnt bestow on me Empty, and without hope I was left Bitter, and haggard I return to thee Elegant in my manner, I can not be Existence I no longer want X-punge me from this expedition Corrupt, counterproductive my life has been Unite me with the true ruler Strike me for being sacrilegious Eliminate the excrement from your earth Denounce me and damn me to hell MUCH LOVE & PEACE
wise1poet	Re: May I Please Be Excused	#1	[-]
Prysmatic Fam Posts: 2433 (12/06/07 17:42:00) The King of Darkness Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts Report Post	i love your work you words are off the hook such feeling but poems like these where you use the letters in the title to start your lines is awesome write on "WITH THE LIGHT COMES DARK WITH THE NIGHT COMES DAY BLANCE YOURSELF LIVE YOUR LIFE" "if you can't stand me ban me, you don't like me BITE me"
waterfallen	Re: May I Please Be Excused	#2	[-]
Posts: 181 (12/08/07 20:56:10) PDs Poetic Mother Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts Report Post	Thanks Wise MUCH LOVE & PEACE
PoetrysChild	Re: May I Please Be Excused	#3	[-]
Prysmatic Fam Posts: 644 (12/08/07 21:53:34) aka 'One Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts Report Post	I love acrostics and did one called SOUL once. I will dig it out of my archive sometime...dig your flow and the message. You amaze me. Tammy
waterfallen	Re: May I Please Be Excused	#4	[-]
Posts: 181 (12/09/07 17:07:38) PDs Poetic Mother Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts Report Post	PoetrysChild Thank you very much I would love to read "SOUL" MUCH LOVE & PEACE

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